The Silent Aviator

Good poem. I agree with Dargquon...

[quote="Meshugenah"] fixed! Thanks

Is my previous post posted TWICE? On my computer, I see two identical posts... What the hell? Are you guys seeing this?

Like the person above me, I also play music...with a drum. Welcome to the online community that is the YWS...enjoy it.

Yes, but Aviator there are things women need to learn in order to fend off an attacker. The majority of the time, mace will do you absolutley no good if ...

Hello. Nice work... I myself lived in Texas until fairly recently;loved it there.

First of all,Amazing story! :) Deja Vu...your story was eerily reminiscent of a coversation I had with a fellow student on today's bus ride...I'm serious, your story is an almost ...

My dad, believe or not, is an excellent diplomat. When I was very small, he said to me, "Never talk about sex, politics, or religion if you want to get ...

Hello. Sadly, young women in our generation are all too often treated as little more than sexual objects...I myself have witnessed sexual harassment in my school's hallways and I did ...

(Wow. I wish I had been on the ship to witness that. Oh well I AM queen. You said MJ got "a little girl." he wuold have grabed a boy. ...

damit i just wrote two pages on this and accidentally deleted them. :evil:

Thanks...

Suddenly, an explosion rocks the YWS-1's rigid hull. A smaller, but deadlier ship than the YWS, the Neverland Ferris Wheel, rams itself into her, igniting inumerable secondary explosions that regretta

I'm new here so I don't know all of the forum's intricacies yet. Thanks for the grammarical advice...I'll correct the poem.

Anything? Any comment, constructive criticism,ect. is welcome...